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syn9
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 7:21 am    Post subject: character revision [quote]

left = old, right = new... better? worse? should i change anything? do the colors suck? clothes suck? etc...







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PostPosted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 7:31 am    Post subject: [quote]

I'd say keep the guy on the left but give him the guy on the right's shoulder pads.
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Modanung
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 12:33 pm    Post subject: [quote]

I like the right one more. I like both his paddy's and his pose. Although his hair does look a bit weird. I think that counts for both of 'em, but the right one has got those two weird pixels.
I suppose a weapon is added later? I think, when both of them would be walking, the right one also looks better.

I'd say right!
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 30, 2002 11:50 pm    Post subject: [quote]

ok, heres an updated version, hows this?


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PostPosted: Sun Dec 01, 2002 11:40 am    Post subject: [quote]

Are that cloth bands? Maybe it would look better if you'd connect them with a piece of other cloth, that would make it a nice cape.
His pull-over is better this way, I think. With the stripe in the middle and those bottom flappy parts coloured red.
He's still got hair pixels.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 01, 2002 6:22 pm    Post subject: Goodness [quote]

I like the revised version at the bottom of the thread. The cloth scraps trailing behind him lend some atmosphere to the character.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 4:05 am    Post subject: [quote]

I like the newest version, reminds me of me :P
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 7:00 pm    Post subject: [quote]

OOkay. I think the first one looks pretty good. keep his trench coat, give him shoulder pads, get rid of the cape. The brown trenchcoat is the best part, i think. get rid of the cape! keep the red shirt. wear the trench coat, but keep it open so it will show the shirt. maybe he could wear a belt?? change the hair a bit. It looks a bit limp. Give him facial expressions!! remember the belt? Maybe make it like squall's from final fantasy 8.
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